Zeek
Demon Weapon
Posts : 1
Join date : 2011-02-25
 |  Subject: Zeek incomplete Fri Feb 25, 2011 10:51 pm | |
| Name:Zeek Espada Nickname:Zeeky Age:17 Gender:male ---------------------------- Physical InformationCharacter Picture: - Spoiler:
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Weapon Appearance:- Spoiler:
Soul Appearance: blue and squishy looking with eyes. Description: (Also have 1 to 2 paragraphs for description) Height:about 5.6 since hes still young Weight:for his age 166 lbs Eye color:blue Defining Marks: (what stands out on your body. This doesn't need to be filled) ---------------------------- Abilities- Spoiler:
- (Tell us what you can do)
-turn into a gunblade
-soul resonance
-Black barrell shot
---------------------------- Mental StatePersonality:Good with ladies,obessed with bunnies,loves his hair,Kind of clumsy. Mentality:Insane very insane. ---------------------------- HistoryZeek started as an orphan..who knows what exactly happened to his parents but it seemed like Zeek was put into more foster homes than a normal kid...but this is because he has this gift, hes able to transform into a gunblade and eat souls..so he wanders around tying to find answers all the why untill he turns 17 and finds the DWMA and this is where the story begins. Sample Rp- Spoiler:
Zabi Okinaga walks through the training grounds passing rocks from left to right, big and small, round to flat, all the way to rough to spikey.
"Man....every time I train I always get goosebumps." Zabi said,"Theres nothing I love more than to wander around in a big field of rocks and boulders, to train my ass off in." Zabi scratches his nose and says," I have had alot of enemies these past few days....and I honestly think I need to figure out some new jutsu while im over here in this field." Zabi looked up and down and all around for a big enough space to stretch his legs, you know to run around, in other words if he makes a big enough explosion, he can run and avoid as much damage as possible.
Zabi started to get frustrated from how he couldnt possibly locate a open space for him to to master this Jutsu. Zabi coughs,"Man..I cant believe I actually swallowed that...cough cough....phew" Zabi said looking around hoping that no one present or hiding heard that."Eh." Zabi kept wandering around untill he saw it,"whoa!!!" Like a gift from the heavens. A great light almost transparent yet luminescent, it shined upon it, it seemed to sit alone so peacefully, looked so untouched....so beautiful.
Zabi raises one eyebrow,"Where....the hell...is that voice coming from?"
Zabi asked while scratching his head....by the way there wasnt anyone around at all.
"Phew....alright this is it....time to get started."
Zabi coughed a few more times,"M..an....I think...I..er...swallowed more than I was.....supposed to...."
Zabi beat on his chest and coughed up dust..A black dust came out.
"haaaa..." Zabi sighed,"Gunpowder..." Zabi activates his Kumori, and summons 12 ghosts."Alright you guys are going to stand in the center right over there ok?"They nodded,"Ok thanks now go." Zabi smiled and pointed to the center of the area. The ghosts seemed to dash to the center of the area, except one who seemed to resemble a girl."huh?...whats the problem" The ghost kept staring at him....it seemed that she was smiling,,,,maybe even blushing.."Uhm? yeah you dont have to stand in the middle of the area like the others so you can go away." Zabi said swaying his hand in the "shoo go away" motion. But the ghost girl continued to stand there staring with ghostly eyes....creepy indeed."Hey your not under my control anymore...now shoo." but the girl didnt leave...the worst thing is she didnt tilt her head or anything after Zabi broke the connection...in fact she didnt even blink."Ok?"Zabi raised one eyebrow.
"I dont know whats going on?..but why...you...looking at me?"
the ghost of the girl giggles and starts to skip toward him, she must have been about 15-16 years old."Whoa dont come any closer..."Zabi said waving his arms around, she picked up speed and laughed as she jumped on Zabi and started hugging him and kissing him,"What the hell? get the hell off of me."
Zabi jumped up and waved his arms around making the girl vanish. "Phew...that was cold and weird rolled into one."Zabi shrugged and looked at the group of ghosts in the middle of the open area. "Time to burn" Zabi said as he inhaled a deep breath, pounded on his chest and exhaled a black
cloud of smoke came out of his mouth.
It surrounded the whole surrounding area,Zabi needed to remember that there was a flint on his upper and a striker on his lower teeth, he needs to know only to strike it when the time is right....or if it backfires then he will get hurt as well.Zabi thinks in his mind and his mind talks,"Ok hold it for a couple of more seconds....and...igni..Ooff" The girl ghost got on his back and hugged him tight..Zabi ignited the flint causing the gunpowder to ignite and makes this big explosion, totally swallowing up the ghosts and the beautiful place."Dammit what are you are doing?"
The fire and smoke finally cleared before seeing all the damage that the jutsu caused."Ok I wanna know why you did it and why you are all up on me?"Zabi was about to back had this girl back to last Monday.
then her face turned from blank to happy and a very warm smile follows it.
she laughed then kissed him on the cheek."Oh k Zabi Im going to be with you for a long time."
Then she vanished, Zabi rubbed his cheek it was wet and warm...she wasnt dead at all. Zabi sits on the rock and wonders what she meant by that...why did she come when he summoned the other ghosts....but the weirdest thing was her eye...she had two different colored eyes and the one had like a pinwheel pattern on it,"Could it be?" Zabi scratched his head and pouted."I should get a training partner this could go alot smoother."
Zabi looked on his shirt and saw that it had a red hair on it.."Hm?"Zabi held it close to his face."Koori...Thats it!"
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Rin
Demon Weapon
Posts : 3
Join date : 2011-02-24
| | Subject: Re: Zeek incomplete Fri Feb 25, 2011 11:18 pm | |
| your image is soul eater litterally. the main character of the anime please change the image if you wish to be approved.
your personality is too short please make it at least a paragraph. you cant be insane and still work with death. also its hard to be a ladies man and be insane.
Black barrell shot? what is this please explain.
add more to your history it should include your child hood your time at the school and becoming a death scythe in great detail please and thank you. | |
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